Honestly Rebecca, I didnt like this one.The model actually looks like she is throwing up and in pain and I just didnt find it sexy at all.Maybe that was your intent, but I have to say, I didnt enjoy it.Thank you for a great site that I check everyday. I love nearly all of your work. Thank you...
I civilly disagree with Thag. I like this one. The sudden loss of the spell book and the ensuing realization works well. It looks like Paul is not getting out of this. He'll just have to suck it up! :)
I liked this one. Conflict is a big part of a story even one as short as this one.
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